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Birthday
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Disclaimer. Each character in the story is an adult and the story is a purely fictional fantasy - I do not support or condone any of the described actions in real life.
A note from Miranda Mackinder
This story has been originally written in Polish and translated to English by AI. Although I'm fluent in English, I'm not comfortable writing fiction in it, hence this solution. I hope the translation is smooth enough. I'd welcome any reviews and suggestions, including ideas of how the story may develop in the second part...

Jacek couldn't believe his eyes. Standing at his doorstep were two lovely girls. A slightly taller brunette in a green sweater, black leggings emphasizing the roundness of her hips, and open-toed sandals. A shorter blonde in a gray hoodie and tight gray sweatpants, thick white socks, and slippers. Both with nice figures and faces. The brunette was holding a bottle of wine in one hand and a bottle of vodka in the other. The blonde, in turn, was holding a box in each hand.

"Hi Jacek," the blonde smiled charmingly, "it's us, your neighbors... Gabi."

"And Pati," said the brunette.

He still stood speechless, unable to utter a word.

"We know it's your birthday. We came to celebrate with you!" said the one who had just introduced herself as Gabi.

"What a nice surprise. Please, come in."

Jacek, acting on his first impulse, immediately invited them inside, happy about this unexpected visit on his birthday, which he had previously thought would be yet another in many years of lonely birthdays. But he immediately felt embarrassed by the mess they would find. He lived in a pile of mess, never having anyone over on a regular basis, and only ordering a cleaning lady every few months. Additionally, he was receiving them unwashed and unchanged, with messy hair, unshaven, and in his pajamas. He felt even more awkward about this. It belatedly occurred to him that he could have asked them to wait fifteen minutes and in that time at least minimally tidy himself and his apartment. But now that he had let them inside, it would be even more out of place to ask them to leave.

How did they know it was his birthday?

When they entered the hallway, Jacek instinctively glanced from behind with a hungry gaze at Gabi's ass, so appetizingly protruding in her tight sweatpants, then quickly rushed to move the delivery boxes that were taking up the entire table aside. Pati showed him the alcohol and explained:

"For you, as befits a man, some vodka, and for the ladies something lighter... hahaha, sorry, we have weak heads."

Jacek took a small glass for himself and wine glasses for the girls. As he was placing the glasses on the table while standing, Gabi, who was already sitting at the table, suddenly reached out and tickled his protruding belly.

"Someone here is a regular customer of Uber Eats... and has a cute little belly from it..."

Both girls burst out laughing, and Jacek turned completely red. His dick, which had no underwear under his pajamas, experienced a slight stiffening in his pants from the girl's affectionate touch on his less attractive organ.

He sat down and they drank the first glass. He sat on one side of the table, the girls on the other. The vodka tasted strange - he couldn't feel much alcohol.

"Time for presents," Gabi blurted out, interrupting a moment of awkward silence. She handed him one box - "open this one, and the other... we want it to remain a surprise, don't open it yet."

He did as she said. It was a large bottle of chili sauce, showing a rating of five out of five possible levels of spiciness.

"Hahaha, we took a bit of a risk, we didn't know if you like spicy..." said Gabi.

"I do, thank you."

"Well then great! You don't even know yourself in what, hmmm... creative way this gift can be used... but you'll find out!" said Pati, which sounded a bit strange and enigmatic.

He drank the second glass, but he didn't feel the alcohol hitting his head. Instead, he was starting to feel strangely sluggish.

Suddenly Pati stood up from her chair and cat-like jumped onto his knees, throwing her arms around his neck. At the same time, Gabi filled the next glass and immediately handed it to Pati's hand. Jacek's penis instinctively tensed upward and clearly touched Pati's ass.

"Come on, hero, drink!" Pati pressed the glass to the speechless boy's throat, and before he could recover, Gabi filled another one and that too immediately landed in his esophagus.

The girls' actions were so synchronized that they must have been planned in advance. That much he was able to understand, but he didn't yet know what it meant. However, he didn't have much time to think or react, because in a moment he was overcome by a complete involuntary limpness. His arms fell helplessly to his sides. He couldn't move his body or speak. He remained conscious, but his vision was blurred.

Pati disappeared as quickly as she had appeared on Jacek's knees, behind the door in the corridor. Jacek just stared with wide eyes, trying to focus his gaze and not knowing what was happening. Gabi grabbed him by the shoulders from behind and pulled his limp body towards the bed (this apartment was one 40-square-meter room, basically there was no room division).

She threw him onto the bedding.

"You slob, your bedding is dirty and crumpled. I bet your dick stinks too!" and she burst out laughing, so different, so more diabolical than her earlier innocent laughter.

Jacek was starting to understand that he had fallen into a trap, that the vodka must have contained some substance. But it was too late to resist, the muscles of his entire body refused to obey him.

Pati returned with a huge, heavy backpack.

"Wondering what's inside? Equipment for training bitches, hahahaha," Pati laughed as sinisterly as Gabi had just a moment ago.

Gabi took off his t-shirt and pajama pants, leaving him naked. He was sweating from fear, but his dick involuntarily rose upward.

Pati walked through the apartment and closed the blinds on all the windows, then handed Gabi the present, the large bottle of chili sauce.

He understood.

"Now we'll see if you really like it spicy!"

Pati pulled nylon gloves out of the backpack and put them on Gabi's hands. Gabi dipped her fingers in the sauce, then massaged it deep into the boy's testicles, so it would penetrate through the skin. Jacek was in agony of pain, but only sweated profusely. He couldn't even moan - his vocal cords were paralyzed. Then Gabi brutally pulled his foreskin down and applied chili sauce to his bare penis under the foreskin.

She savored her sadism, applying more and more layers of spicy sauce to Jacek's genitals. As one layer penetrated the skin, she applied another. The entire genitals reacted visually with extreme redness, and in Jacek's sensation with unbearable burning pain.

"You're in hell, and I am your Satan, you whore, slut, tramp," she said looking him straight in the eyes, drawing even more pleasure from his verbal degradation than from the awareness of the pain he was experiencing - "your dick is suitable for cutting off and flushing down the toilet, and your balls for roasting on a spit. Man-whore, faggot, bag of rot, cockroach, watch how I rule you!"

When this first torture was over and Jacek thought nothing worse could happen to him from these sadists, he saw Gabi with the box from the unopened present.

"And now we'll reveal the surprise present."

She tore open the box and revealed a strap-on ready to be attached at the waist with a huge black artificial penis with metal spikes attached along its entire surface.

Then the girls took straps out of the backpack, turned him onto his stomach, and tied his limbs at the ankles and wrists to the bed legs, immobilizing his body in a painful spread. Gabi put a tight blindfold on him. Pati attached the strap-on to her leggings, and Gabi, still in nylon gloves, carefully smeared the dildo along its entire length with a generous layer of chili sauce.

Pati lay down like a thoroughbred, ruthless predator on the helpless Jacek, her hands clenched on his neck, suffocating him, and with the giant artificial penis she drilled his anus as sharply and deeply as her strength allowed.

Gabi sat on the sofa in another part of the apartment and grabbed Jacek's phone. She saw birthday wishes from some girl in a private chat on Messenger. For fun, she started writing to her. At one point she received a text:

"that's definitely you? xD you're writing kind of differently"

She replied:

"no, it's not him. I'm his rapist. my partner is currently fucking him in the ass with a strap-on, and I'm bored and waiting for my turn. want to join us?"

Messages started coming in:

"WHAAAAT? XDDDDDD"

"wtf"

"now you've really gone too far"
"disgusting joke yuck I'll have nightmares"

"bye"

When Pati tired of continuous penetration and suffocating her helpless anal bitch, she took pictures in turn of his face, genitals, and anus in a state of devastation after such treatment, and switched places with Gabi. Now Gabi was fucking him, and Pati in the meantime published the taken photos on pornographic sites, using his own phone.

Then it was time for Jacek to suck the dildo taken directly from his anus, stained with a mixture of chili sauce and his own shit and blood. The girls penetrated him one after another again. The spikes also injured his oral cavity, and the wounds began to burn terribly from the chili. Now this devastating pain was ruining him simultaneously in three places - genitals, anus, and mouth.

Then Pati took a large paddle for beating out of the backpack, and turning him back to the previous position, she beat the maltreated boy's buttocks without mercy. Meanwhile, Gabi, listening to the sound of rhythmic slaps, searched the apartment for money, and quite easily found it in one of the drawers.

"How nice, our nerd has saved quite a bit for us, hahahaha."

"Your ass isn't satisfying to beat, because it's so skinny," Pati verbally abused Jacek at this time - "I've beaten some black girls whose ass is like four or six of yours. You should think about silicone, whore."

"Hahahaha, I'd like to see you press your pathetic head as deep as possible into the ass of such a fat black woman, and she shits straight into your face," Gabi chimed in.

"As a punishment for having such a pathetic ass..." Pati spoke again - "I'll beat until I'm satisfied. It's already red, but I'm waiting for purple to break through the red..."


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