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No Good Deed

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Chapter 16 of 18

Chapter 16

Jenny’s eyes, cool and calculating, held his for a long moment. She tapped a perfectly manicured nail on the polished surface of her desk, the only sound in the room besides the woman's muffled whimpers. She was weighing him, measuring the risk against the reward. It was a business decision, nothing more.

"Alright," she said finally, a slow, decisive smile spreading across her face. "I'll play your game. You'll stay as my 'guest' until the funds are transferred. Once money is secure and in the new account, I will release you. I'll give you enough cash to start again somewhere new. We never see each other again."

She stood up, a clear dismissal. "Prove you're as good as you say you are."

The same indifferent man returned and led James back to his grey room. He was chained back to the metal ring on the wall, the shackle clicking shut with finality. He was left alone with his thoughts, the cold concrete a harsh reality against his skin. During the night, he was jolted awake by the sound of a woman's screams, high and piercing, followed by the sound of laughter. Jenny's laughter. The screams intensified, raw and desperate, then he heard Jenny's clear, commanding voice. "Take her away, then you can join me in my room." A male voice, deep and subservient, replied, "Yes, Mistress Jenny." Then, just sobbing and the scrabbling of something being dragged across the farmyard. He eventually fell into a troubled sleep, the sounds of the house's dark life echoing in his dreams.

He was woken by the same man, who wordlessly uncuffed his leg. He followed him back to the main house, this time to a large, modern bathroom. A set of clean clothes was laid out on a counter: a grey tracksuit and a pair of plain track shoes. He showered, the hot water a luxury he hadn't known in months, washing away the grime and the stink of the cellar. He dressed, the soft fabric of the tracksuit a strange comfort against his skin.

Over the next hour, they fed him a simple but hearty meal of eggs and toast, which he devoured. They then sat him down at a small table in a sterile side room and placed a high-end laptop in front of him. They left him alone.

The world fell away. The fear, the pain, the humiliation—it all receded as his fingers flew across the keyboard. He was a conductor, and the global financial network was his orchestra. He navigated through layers of security, bypassed firewalls, and initiated the cascading reversals, his code a silent, invisible weapon. It was a masterpiece of digital subterfuge.

Sometime later, the door opened, and Jenny walked in. "Is it done?" she asked, her voice tight with anticipation.

James looked up, his eyes clear and focused. "It's done," he said. "The funds will be fully transferred within an hour."

"The bank codes," she demanded.

He looked at her, a moment's hesitation. This was the point of no return. He decided to trust her, to trust the cold logic of their shared greed. He reeled off a series of alphanumeric strings.

Jenny smiled as she typed them into her own tablet. A screen populated with numbers. Account balances. Over three million pounds. It was all there. "Pleasure doing business with you," she said.

His world went black as a thick, blindfold was tied around his head. He felt the cold click of a key as the collar was removed, then another as the spiked cage was finally unlocked from his aching flesh. He was helped into a vehicle and driven in silence for over an hour. When the van stopped, the door was opened, and he was told to get out. The blindfold was removed. He was standing in the middle of Maidstone town center, the bustle of the Saturday shoppers a disorienting cacophony. The man handed him an envelope and drove away without a word.

James opened it. Inside was a thick wad of cash. Five thousand pounds. He smiled, the first genuine, unforced smile in months. He walked to the train station and bought a ticket to Rochester. He enjoyed the slow ride, watching the world go by, a free man. As the train made its way through the small village stations towards Strood, where he would have to change trains, he felt a sense of calm settle over him. He was home. And he had a plan.

The train pulled into Strood station, its brakes screeching in a final, weary sigh. The automated doors hissed open, and James stepped out onto the platform, the cool evening air a welcome shock against his skin. He was supposed to take the connecting train to Rochester, a short, ten-minute journey across the bridge. But as he looked at the departures board, a different impulse took hold. He needed to walk. The two miles back to his old life, to the town he once knew, seemed like a necessary pilgrimage, a way to clear the fog of the last eight months and reclaim his own mind.

He left the station and fell into step along the pavement, the rhythmic slap of his new trainers on the concrete a steady, grounding beat. The River Medway glimmered darkly to his left, the lights of Rochester twinkling on the opposite shore. His mind, free from the immediate threat of pain and survival, began to drift back, to the very beginning of the nightmare. Eight months ago. It felt like a lifetime.

He remembered the first time he started talking to Nichola. The thrill of it, the dangerous allure. He remembered confiding in his best friend, Suzy, from school, who he now worked with in IT. The conversation was as clear in his head as if it were happening right now, clear as daylight.

"You know you're going to get scammed, don't you?" she had told him, her voice flat, her fingers never stopping their dance across her keyboard as she debugged a line of code. "You already know somebody has been sticking their nose in your stuff, you told me that yourself. The weird login attempts, the files accessed when you were offline. It's a red flag the size of a billboard."

He knew she was right. The logical, programmer part of his brain knew she was right. But his little head always did the thinking as far as dominant women were concerned, a trait that had always been his weakness and his downfall. He had laughed it off, telling Suzy she was just being paranoid. He went along to meet Nichola anyway, driven by a foolish, desperate hope.

Luckily, that same foolishness was tempered by a sliver of caution. After that conversation, he and Suzy had devised a way to place a trace on his considerable assets. It was a game to her at first, a challenge, a way to prove her own skills. She was watching from afar, a digital guardian angel.

*****

Suzy had just settled onto her sofa, a large bowl of popcorn balanced on her lap and a cold beer sweating on the coaster beside her. The familiar, epic theme music of House of the Dragon began to swell through her surround sound speakers. She took a sip of beer and grabbed the remote, ready to lose herself in the machinations and dragon-fire of Westeros.

"Typical," she thought to herself as her phone, placed face up on the coffee table, buzzed insistently. She groaned, pausing the show. It was a notification from her Ring doorbell. Probably another lost delivery driver or a neighbor's cat. She put her beer down and picked up the phone, ready to dismiss the alert.

But she froze. The image on the screen was not a delivery driver. It was James.

He looked… different. Thinner, gaunt, his face pale and haunted in the cool light of the porch lamp. He was wearing a simple grey tracksuit, but he stood with a strange, hunched posture, as if expecting a blow at any moment. But it was him. It was really him.

A string of curses, creative and colorful, left her lips. She launched herself off the sofa, the bowl of popcorn tumbling to the floor, forgotten. She ran to the door, her heart hammering against her ribs, and flung it open.

He looked at her, and the carefully constructed walls he had built around himself over the last few months crumbled into dust. Tears welled up in his eyes, hot and unstoppable, a release of eight months of pain, fear, and humiliation.

Suzy didn't hesitate. She threw herself at him, her arms wrapping around his neck in a fierce, protective hug. He was solid, real. He was here. He put his face in her hair, burying himself in the familiar, comforting scent, and took a huge, shuddering sniff. As usual, she smelled of apples. She had been using the same green apple shampoo since they were teenagers, a constant in a world that had been turned upside down. It was the smell of safety. The smell of home.

She held him for a long time, feeling him tremble, her own eyes stinging with unshed tears. She didn't ask questions. She didn't need to. She had seen everything. Eventually, she let him go, but only to take his hand, her grip firm and reassuring.

"Come on, you idiot," she said, her voice thick with emotion. She dragged him into her neat, semi-detached house, kicking the door shut behind them, shutting out the world and finally bringing him home.


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