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Marcus Makes A Mistake.

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Chapter 11

 The doorbell chimed. Sarah scrambled to her feet and moved with practiced speed to the entrance. She fell to her knees the moment the heavy door swung open, her forehead touching the floor.

"Welcome, Mistress Amber. Welcome, Mistress Sophia."

The two women swept past her without a word, their leather coats brushing her bowed head. Neither acknowledged her existence. Sarah remained frozen, counting their footsteps until they were far enough inside, then rose and followed at a respectful distance, her eyes downcast.

She knew what they thought of her. Knew the contempt that radiated from them like heat from a furnace. Mistress Sophia had attended the same school, a year ahead of Sarah, and still considered her the teacher's pet, the brown-nosing little bitch who'd slept her way to the top. She'd made it clear, on more than one occasion, that she'd love to get Sarah alone in her private playroom for a "remedial lesson."

Mistress Amber's hatred was more personal. Her nephew was serving two years in Borstal for minor offenses—petty theft, vandalism, the usual teenage stupidity. But Sarah had been the prosecutor who pushed for maximum sentencing, who'd painted the boy as a dangerous criminal in the making. Amber had never forgiven her. Had, in fact, sworn to make Sarah pay for every day of that sentence.

Sarah followed them into the lounge, her heart hammering. She was safe under Jenifer's protection—for now. But she knew, with cold certainty, that if Jenifer ever grew bored with her, these two would be waiting. And they would not be gentle.

Jenifer rose from her chair, arms spread wide. "Amber, Sophia. So good of you to come.”

"Jenifer, darling, it's been far too long," Sophia purred, pulling her into a deep kiss that spoke of shared beds and darker secrets. Amber embraced Jenifer next, her voice cutting like a whip. "Why do you still keep that bitch? I thought you'd have traded her in years ago."

Sarah's blood turned to ice. Jenifer's smile never faltered, but her eyes went hard as diamonds.

"Sarah knows her place. Don't you, pet?"

Sarah hit the floor instantly. "Yes, Mistress. Always."

"Prove it. Crawl to Mistress Amber and worship her boots. Show her what a well-trained slut looks like."

Sarah moved forward on hands and knees, her heart hammering against her ribs. She could feel Amber's loathing like a physical force, a predator's gaze measuring her for a skinning. This was a test. Failure meant being offered up as a party favor to the two cruelest women she knew.

Her lips touched the toe of Amber's boot—softly, reverently. She kissed her way up to the ankle, each press of her lips a silent plea for mercy.

Amber's other boot slammed down on Sarah's shoulder, pinning her to the floor. "Pathetic."

She unbuttoned her leather trench coat, revealing a corset and thigh-high boots. She unclipped the riding crop from her belt and looked to Jenifer, one eyebrow raised.

Jenifer smiled, lifted her hand, and showed three fingers. Permission granted. Three strokes.

Amber didn't hesitate. The crop whistled through the air and cracked across Sarah's rubber-clad back with brutal precision. Once. Twice. Three times. The rubber offered no protection—the impact drove straight through to the welts beneath, making Sarah scream into the carpet.

 "Better," Amber said, stepping off Sarah's back. "But I still say you should trade the bitch in. I've got a delicious little cunt at home—33, Ultrasound specialist, Indian girl, Sikh, I think. Boy, can she take a beating, and her tongue, well, that’s another story. “

Jenifer's laugh was bright and sharp as broken glass. "Sarah's still useful. For now."

Sophia drifted over to Marcus, her fingers stroking his hooded head like he was a prized hound. "And what do we have here, darling? New acquisition?"

"The fool who broke in," Jenifer said, sipping her wine. "Serving his sentence with me instead of prison. Much more educational, don't you think?"

Amber looked up from where Sarah still knelt, her eyes hard as flint. "At least he had a choice," she spat, grinding her heel deeper into Sarah's shoulder until she moaned. "My nephew didn't get a choice when your little pet here buried him."

Sophia rolled her eyes, bored with the old grievance. "Let it go, Amber dear. The boy was trash. Sarah was just doing her job."

"Her job," Amber sneered, pressing harder. Sarah whimpered, her face pressed to the floor.

Jenifer's voice cut through like a whip crack. "Enough. Drinks, ladies?"

"Gin and tonic," Sophia purred. "Heavy on the gin."

"Red wine," Amber said, finally lifting her heel.

"Sarah, fetch the drinks. My usual."

"Yes, Mistress." Sarah's voice was hoarse with relief as she scrambled to her feet, her shoulder throbbing, and fled the room.

Amber watched her go, her smile predatory. "She's getting slow, Jenifer. Soft. You should let me take her for a weekend. I'd bring her back properly motivated."

  Jenifer's eyes glittered with cruel promise. "We'll see. After tonight's entertainment, we can arrange a weekend trade." She turned to Marcus, her boot connecting hard with his arse. "Up, boy."

Marcus scrambled to his feet, swaying dangerously. The hood's eye holes were covered with a heavy blindfold, and without his hands for balance, he was clumsy, pathetic. Jenifer grabbed his shoulder with bruising force and shoved him to the center of the room, positioning him like a piece of meat on display.

"Present yourself properly," she snapped. "Legs apart, hands behind your back, chest out. Show our guests what you're worth."

He complied, as much as he could in his binds, his body trembling. Sophia and Amber circled him slowly, their heels clicking a predatory rhythm. Amber's hand grabbed his caged cock without warning, squeezing it hard enough to make the studs bite deeper. He gasped around the ring gag.

"Is this thing any good?" Amber asked, her voice dripping with disdain.

"Nothing special," Jenifer replied, sipping her wine. "Adequate, I suppose. For a beginner."

"You haven't used it yet?" Amber's fingers probed the cage, examining it as a farmer would check livestock.

"Not yet. He's still in training. Can't have him thinking he deserves pleasure."

Amber's laugh was sharp. "And what about your slut? Has she had a ride?"

Jenifer's smile turned cold. "No, Amber. Sarah has not. She's been denied as well. I don't reward my pets with cock until they've earned it. And neither of them has."

She stepped closer, her boot pressing on Marcus's foot. "Besides, this one needs to learn that his cock is useless. That his entire purpose is to serve, not to feel. Isn't that right, pet?"

Marcus could only drool and nod, his world narrowed to the pain in his foot, the humiliation of their inspection, and the terrifying promise of what "entertainment" meant.

Sarah returned with the drinks. She held the tray steady as each of the ladies took their drinks without acknowledging her. 

The three dominants continued their conversation while the two slaves were ignored. 

Eventually, Jenifer suggested they take the subs to the dungeon. They all agreed.

"Sarah, take the boy, we'll be down in a bit"

"Yes, Mistress," replied Sarah. She took the leash and led Marcus away while the three Dominants finished their drinks and chatted.

Ten minutes later, Jenifer led the procession, her black rubber basque gleaming in the low light, thigh-high boots clicking on the stone floor. Sophie followed, naked except for leather harness and boots, her eyes already dark with desire. Amber brought up the rear, her trench coat billowing, a leather leash coiled in her gloved hand. Marcus knelt in the center, hooded and cuffed, his body trembling. Sarah waited beside the whipping bench, her red catsuit peeled to her waist, gold collar catching the light.

"Secure him," Jenifer commanded.

Sarah moved first, her hands surprisingly gentle as she guided Marcus to the whipping bench. "Over, pet. Be good for me." She helped him bend over the padded leather, his torso resting on the main bench, his legs spread wide and secured to the legs with heavy leather cuffs. She buckled his wrists to the opposite side, stretching him taut. A spreader bar was attached to his ankles, forcing his legs obscenely apart. She added a final strap across his lower back, pinning him completely immobile. His hooded head hung down, giving him a limited view of the floor. His caged cock and balls dangled helplessly between his spread legs. "Perfect," Sarah purred, running her gloved hand over his exposed arse.

Sophie turned to Jenifer, pulling her close. Their kiss was deep, hungry, filled with mutual power. Jenifer led Sophie back to the padded throne where she sat with her legs wide open so Sophie would find her dripping cunt. Jenifer's gloved hand twisted in Sophie's hair, guiding her rhythm as her hips ground upward. "That's it, slut. Just like that. Make me come."

Across the room, Amber clipped the leash to Sarah's gold collar, yanking her roughly to the spanking bench. "Over. Now." Sarah bent without protest, her arse raised high. Amber pulled a massive black dildo from a shelf, slicking it with lube. She gagged Sarah with a penis gag, strapping it brutally tight, the rubber forcing her jaw wide. Then she bound her wrists behind her back with leather belts, cinching them until the leather bit deep.

"Spread wider, you prosecuting bitch," Amber hissed, her boot kicking Sarah's ankles. "You took two years of my nephew's life. I'm going to take  your dignity."

She pushed the dildo into Sarah's arse without warning, forcing it past the tight ring of muscle. Sarah screamed into the gag, the sound muffled and desperate. Amber twisted it deeper, her other hand reaching around to pinch Sarah's clit hard enough to make her convulse. "This is what you deserve."

After several minutes of brutal pounding, Amber dragged Sarah by the hair off the bench, keeping her hair in her hand. She turned and leaned back against the bench, forcing Sarah’s face between her legs. "Kiss it. Worship it. Show me how sorry you are."

Sarah's tongue found Amber's cunt, lapping with desperate devotion. Amber pulled her head back by the hair. "My arse too, slut. Clean it."

Sarah's tongue found Amber's arsehole, lapping and probing while Amber held her head in place, grinding against her face. "That's it. Deeper. Show me what a worthless cunt you are.”

The dildo is still in Sarah’s arse, plopped out as she was servicing Amber

"Enough," Jenifer finally said, her voice breathless from Sophie's attentions. "Now, the main event."

The three Dominas converged on Marcus. Jenifer took the cane, Sophie selected a heavy leather strap, and Amber chose a short, vicious riding crop. They took turns, the cane painting parallel lines across his cheeks, the strap leaving thick bruising bands, the crop finding every sensitive spot. Marcus lost count at twenty-seven, his mind dissolving into a haze of pain.

"He's ready," Jenifer said, putting down her cane and picking up a large bottle of lubricant, slicking her gloved fingers. She pushed one into his arse, then two, stretching him roughly.

"First privilege of the evening," she purred. "All three of us will take your arse. And you'll thank us for each one."

She fucked him first, her strap-on cock driving deep, her hips slamming against his bruised arse. Sophie went next, her smaller but thicker dildo making him scream. Amber took her turn last, her cock the largest, making him sob with each thrust.

After each use, Sarah was forced to crawl to the bench and clean the strap-on with her mouth, licking off the mix of lube and Marcus's arse while the Dominas watched and laughed.

When they finished, they dragged Marcus and Sarah to a large cage in the corner. Marcus was fitted with a strap-on over his cage, the dildo jutting obscenely from his groin. Sarah was forced to straddle him, face to face, and lower herself onto the dildo. They were then tied together—rope wound around their torsos, binding them chest to chest, their wrists secured to each other's thighs. They would spend the night impaled together, every movement causing friction and discomfort, their bodies locked in a perverse embrace. Drool from Marcus’s ringed mouth dripped steadily onto Sarah, running down her cheek. 


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