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Marcus Makes A Mistake.

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Chapter 5

Ten minutes later, Jenifer descended the stairs, carrying the matte-black case, Sarah trailing behind her at a respectful distance. Jenifer placed the case on the kitchen table and unlatched it, revealing the shock collars and fobs nestled in precision-cut foam.

"Take a fob and link it," Jenifer ordered, not looking at Sarah. "Make sure your phone pairs properly."

Sarah moved immediately, pulling out her phone and opening the app. Jenifer selected her own fob, holding down the button for five seconds until the LED flared and settled into a steady green. She watched as Sarah completed the same process, the younger woman's fingers moving with practiced efficiency.

"Now the collar," Jenifer commanded, lifting the matte black device from its housing. Electrodes lined the inner surface, small metal discs ready to deliver precise shocks. She turned to Marcus, who sat chained to the chair, his eyes wide with apprehension. "Hold still."

She fastened the shock collar around his neck, the spring steel clicking into place with finality. The leather felt cool against his skin, the electrodes pressing lightly against his pulse points.

"What the fuck—"

Jenifer's hand cracked across his face before he could finish. "Silence."

She held up the fob so he could see it clearly. "This controls your obedience." She pressed the button once.

A sharp zap sizzled through the collar. Marcus jolted, his body convulsing against the restraints, a strangled grunt.

"Level one," Jenifer purred, running a fingernail along the leather. "There are ten levels. I decide which one you receive."

She pressed the button twice more in quick succession. Two more shocks, harder this time, made Marcus's muscles spasm and his eyes roll back briefly.

"Green means good behavior," Jenifer explained, her voice dripping with false sweetness. "Red means you're about to experience level ten. And I hold the controls."

She turned to Sarah, who stood waiting with her own fob ready. "Demonstrate level three."

Sarah pressed her button. A sustained shock pulsed through the collar, making Marcus thrash against his bonds.

"Perfect," Jenifer said, satisfaction thick in her voice. "Now you understand the consequences of disobedience."

She stepped back, surveying her handiwork. Marcus slumped in his restraints, chest heaving, eyes glazed with shock and terror. She smiled.

"Welcome to your new life, Marcus. This collar is programmed to allow you only what I wish you to access. If you leave the house, you will get an automatic ten.”

"Now you need to clean up," she announced, her voice cutting through his hesitation. "Then we'll discuss the damage you did to my window."

The chains fell away with satisfying clicks. Marcus stood, his body unfolding stiffly, and stretched with the caution of a man who'd learned that movement was a privilege, not a right.

"Remove the rest of your clothes," Jenifer ordered, her tone brooking no argument.

His hands moved to his T-shirt, then paused—that flicker of male pride she'd be beating out of him soon enough. She waited, letting the silence stretch until it became its own threat. Finally, he stepped out of his jeans and boxers.

He held his hands over his cok, but Jenifer slapped them away, the crack of flesh on flesh echoing in the kitchen. "You will hide nothing from me, boy. Nothing is yours to conceal anymore."

He dropped his hands, his face flushing crimson. His cock, predictably, twitched at the humiliation. They always did.

"Sarah, my love," Jenifer said, not taking her eyes off Marcus. "Please take these rags and dispose of them."

"Yes, Mistress." Sarah scooped up his discarded clothes—jeans, shirt, the pathetic boxers he'd thought would protect him—and carried them out of the kitchen like she was taking out the trash. Which, essentially, she was.

"Follow me, boy."

Jenifer led him out of the kitchen, down a narrow hallway to what had once been the scullery when this house was built for a doctor over 200 years ago. Now it served a different purpose. The room was small, barely ten feet square, dominated by a simple cot with a thin mattress and a single blanket. Spartan. Functional. Perfect for a slave's first night.

A door at the far end led to what used to be the coal cellar. She'd had it converted last year. The shower room beyond was tiled in black, with a single drain in the floor and a mixer tap with a hose attachment on the wall. No curtain, no privacy, no dignity. Exactly as it should be.

"This is where you'll sleep," she told him, gesturing to the cot. "And through there is where you'll clean yourself.”

He stood in the center of the room, naked and shivering despite the warmth, his eyes darting from the cot to the shower door and back to her. Waiting for the next command. Learning his place.

“Go and shower, you’ll find soap, shaving cream, and a razor on the shelf in there. I expect you to be clean-shaven every day, and I want all that gone,” She said, pointing to his hairy crutch. 

The cold water hit like a slap, making him yelp and dance away from the spray. Marcus fumbled with the hose, adjusting the temperature while his fingers kept probing the collar, searching for any weakness. All he found was a seamless join and a sharp, biting shock that made his entire body convulse.

"Shit!" The word tore from his throat, raw and desperate.

Sarah leaned against the doorframe, arms crossed, her smile predatory. "It's a learning process, pet. You'll adapt."

He jumped again—he hadn't sensed her there, hadn't heard her approach. She let her gaze roam over his wet, naked body with the frank appraisal of someone examining property. Mistress Jennifer's property. Nice shape, really. Decent cock, already half-hard despite his fear. Tight arse, the kind that would look lovely striped with welts.

"Mistress Jenifer told me to watch you," she purred, her voice a velvet command. "To make sure you follow every instruction. To make sure you understand that even your most basic functions are no longer private."

 Marcus kept his back to Sarah, the hose awkward and unwieldy, with nowhere to hang it. This was exactly how Jenifer and Sarah had designed it—to make every action as awkward and humiliating as possible. He had to hold the hose in one hand while scrubbing himself with the other, then rinse, then repeat. No dignity, no ease, just constant, conscious effort.

Shaving was worse. No sink, no mirror, just a cheap razor and his own trembling fingers. It’s a wonder he didn’t nick himself. When he got to his genitals, he had to sit on the cold tile, legs spread, fumbling blindly. The water temperature dropped steadily, another detail Jenifer had insisted on—a timer on the water heater, just enough for a quick, uncomfortable wash.

Finally, he stood, shivering and searching for towels that weren't there.

Sarah rose from the cot and stepped into the shower doorway, blocking his exit. "Come here, Marcus."

He walked over, hands instinctively moving to cover his cock. She let him get close, then pointed at the floor. "Stand here. Hands behind your back. I need to inspect you."

He obeyed, his reluctance obvious. Sarah crouched down, her face level with his groin, and reached for him. He flinched as her fingers closed around his cock, lifting it, turning it, examining it like a piece of meat at market.

"Hold still," she murmured, her breath hot against his thigh. She moved his cock this way and that under the pretense of checking for errant hairs, letting her thumb brush the underside. Her other hand cupped his balls, rolling them gently, feeling them tighten under her touch. She leaned in closer, letting him feel her breath on his skin, letting him hear the soft sounds she made as she "inspected" him.

His cock began to thicken, responding despite his fear. Sarah smiled, letting it grow in her hand until it stood at full attention, pulsing with blood and humiliation.

"Interesting," she purred, giving it one final, possessive squeeze before releasing it. "Mistress Jenifer will be pleased."

She stood, wiping her hands on her dress, and went to the corner to retrieve a towel. "Dry yourself."

He took the towel, his hands shaking. Sarah watched him dry off, his erection bobbing with every movement.

 Once dried, Sarah snatched the towel from his hands. "Go stand beside your cot," she ordered, her voice leaving no room for negotiation.

Marcus moved to the narrow bed, his naked body still glistening with dampness. Sarah threw the towel into the hallway and stepped in front of him, blocking any path to the door. "Mistress will be here in a minute," she informed him. "The correct way to greet either Mistress Jenifer or me is on your knees with your forehead touching the floor."

His jaw tightened. "You've got to be fucking kidding me. I ain't doing that shit."

The slap cracked across his face before he finished speaking, sharp and practiced. Then her hand was between his legs, fingers closing around his balls with surgical precision. She twisted, just enough to make his vision blur, and leaned in until her face was inches from his.

"Now listen here, you little shit," she hissed, her voice low and deadly. "What you don't seem to understand is that you signed your life away. For the next six months, you belong to Mistress Jenifer. You have no say in what happens to you. None. So I suggest you get with the program pretty damn quick if you know what's good for you."

She twisted harder. "NOW GET ON YOUR FUCKING KNEES."

Tears sprang to his eyes as she released her grip. His legs buckled, folding beneath him until his knees hit the cold floor. Slowly, humiliatingly, he bent forward until his forehead rested against the concrete.

Sarah stepped. "Better."

Marcus stayed there, his mind reeling, wondering what the hell he had agreed to.


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