Series
Savage
This series will take a break. With the current world events, it's not a good idea to publish the rest of the story. And I have gotten feedback that confirm that I have made the right decision. A science fiction story with very kinky protagonists, and an attempt of storytelling like a Matriochka doll, where the perspective and what's given in earlier chapters change as the story progress. There's one illustration per chapter, that comment on the events, matters and details described in story. (Sometimes the image illustrate the previous chapter, not to be a spoiler for the reader.) The original story was written in 1999-2001. With quite a break before wrapping up the last chapters. The idea of uploading a mind, is very old in science fiction, and go back to Metropolis. And since no writing exist in a vacuum, there's one important author, Alastair Reynolds that have given part of the inspiration. Since I did read Chasm City at the time of writing the latter half of Savage. The first attempt of translation to English was done quite some years ago, it was one abridged version, this translation bring the entire story in full. But some chapters with some revision, and some details changed from the original, most changes are done after 'Quantum echo chamber'.
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20
Stories
184 min
Reading time
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Reading order
Reading order
Short
Pilar have a rude awakening in a basement. A very stereotype beginning, of a very twisted story.
10 mins
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4,321 reads
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English
4.3
Short
Pilar get a nice welcome present, some lovely chimes to wear. This chapter also provide some background, on how the two protagonists met.
7 mins
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2,521 reads
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English
4.6
Short
Pilar get a serious makeover, though of a kind that might not be suitable for any regular women's publication. In fact even BME might blush if they ever get to see this.
21 mins
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5,805 reads
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English
4.7
Short
Just a regular day with a bit of artsy photography, some garage work with one engine hoist, plus whipping of course.
9 mins
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2,533 reads
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English
4.7
Short
Boxing day.
11 mins
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4,979 reads
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English
4.7
Short
Moira don's a nice parade uniform and do some DIY work as a electrician.
10 mins
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3,227 reads
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English
4.7
Short
Moira turn out to be into SSC after all? No that's a big lie, nothing sensible or any sanity to be found here. But she do have a backup in case something happens. So while being a compulsive torturer, she bring us a cautionary tale with moral teachings: Safety first!
4 mins
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2,258 reads
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English
4.9
Short
This is possibly the darkest of the chapters in the first part of Savage, perhaps not for the squeamish. But it come with a lovely illustration at right, and one product placement at left. Yes, while the story is provided for free for you dear readers. We need to make some money so that it will be possible to print this story into one actual book. That won't happen soon though, as we need to await the invention of holographic printing.
3 mins
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3,399 reads
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English
4.8
Short
Pilar go on a silent strike. While Moira gets in touch with some guys online, to get their opinion on her progress as a slave trainer.
8 mins
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2,030 reads
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English
4.8
Short
Moira must be quite an envy for any dominant, with so much equipment at her disposal. Though I have no idea of the purpose of the two ribbed objects seen at left on the illustration for this chapter. With these two lunatics, it's hard to tell, perhaps those are intended for torpedo warfare.
12 mins
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2,258 reads
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English
4.9
Short
The second section or 'book' of Savage start at this point. So it is time to open up the first Matriochka doll, and have a peek inside. (Though the cover image in the first chapter might have been a spoiler for... Things to come.)
5 mins
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2,179 reads
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English
4.4
Short
Pilar is bubbly enthusiastic over her experience, and for being so ruthlessly tortured. This chapter got quite some exposition, setting the stage for the following chapters and events.
10 mins
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1,611 reads
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English
4.2
Short
Pilar decide to do some hacking..... on her own mind, then the two take a trip to France. (Well not in real.)
5 mins
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1,922 reads
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English
5.0
Short
Pilar make a long distance call, and learn the actual identity of her cruel Mistress.
18 mins
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1,226 reads
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English
4.7
Short
“Standing in the hall of the great cathedral. Waiting for the transport to come. Starship 21zna9. A good friend of mine, follows the stars. Venus and Mars, are alright tonight.” (Paul McCartney and Wings 1975) .........and yes, one suggestion that turn up when the two are brain storming was used for the cover illustration shown in the first chapter.
7 mins
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1,180 reads
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English
5.0
Short
Something from their virtual session follow Pilar into the real world, her perception of reality crumbles.
9 mins
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1,409 reads
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English
5.0
Short
The only way for Pilar and Moira to meet in person, is to send the contents of Moira's mind, her memory and personality to a waiting clone. At this point every mad scientist is supposed to say: "What could possibly go wrong."
8 mins
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3,730 reads
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English
5.0
Short
Moira becomes a space pirate by stealing a very fast spaceship, and go full blast in a wild dash to get away from it all.
13 mins
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1,089 reads
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English
4.8
Short
Pilar have asked for a rush job, cloning a new sadistic Mistress. And the guys who do the work do indeed intend to give a 'full charge of the soul.'
9 mins
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1,559 reads
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English
5.0